I am a coffee drinker. I love the smell
of fresh brewing coffee early in the morning
just sitting there, enjoying it. It also
gives me a certain touch of energy.
I think if you drink a lot of decaf it might
have the same affect.
well penned and nicely written

I love how consistent you are in presenting your metaphors. Very admirable, I like that. And I love coffee; I thought this was going to win. :P

The "Uh-mmm" worked really well. It gave the effect that the persona has just awoken and it is early morning. Creative.

Well, I'm a weird one... I hate the taste of coffee but love the smell of it....and I absolutely love when someone uses coffee metaphorically. :D

I agree with Xanthe, the "uh-mmm" works fantastic! I can just see someone saying "uh-mmm" pouring a cup of coffee with bed hair going on and sleepy eyes! lol

Will be nominating this :)