This is heartfelt and intense.... I can feel the pain of the people yiu describe here. .
Awesome piece gal:)
Keep writing:)

I love this piece Rusheena, and I'll tell you why because it comes from the heart, it tells us about you, it gives us an insight into things we may not necessarily have come across, it helps us understand, it paints a picture...
It was penned with sadness but with hope and dedication and pride...

x

This piece is mesmerising, I absolutely love it
You feel the emotion just spilling off the page,
I read alot about the history surrounding this topic
One quote from a film sticks in my mind.

"Just because something's popular,like slavery
Don't make it right"

I think your wording captured the reality
That people used to live ,

Seriously amazing piece.

I am almost speechless Rusheena... This peice is moving from the first line, steadily through the last. I can strongly relate to this because of my heritage- I am Native American! This is one of those reads that reaches into you and stirs your soul. It is so powerful and moving. It is amazing. Wonderful job here. And I mean wonderful!!!

xoxo Crystal

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This is a true heartfelt write missy...

If someone would, as I can't... This is nomination worthy.

Your simple, yet powerful wording gives great imagery... Suffering and pain for a bigger picture... The Freedom to be an equal.

Hats off to you missy...

Brilliant write!!!

This comes from the heart, every word touches the soul... you painted such a vivid picture with your words