Comments : I won't be back again.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    I am glad your character found the strength to leave, If this was you well done. If not this is a great message to those that may find themselves in this situation,
    You stress the fact that things only get better for the short term. People can't really changed, they are wired up a certain way.

    I love the anger as the poem builds to the conclusion.

    great write.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    I am glad too. Stay strong.Take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This poem id very touching, and personal to me. It is not always as easy as leaving like what people suggest to do. You have penned here a very difficult situation and you showed from the beginning how things were good and all the promises he made you, and then told the story of the change in him and the relationship and his actions of dealing with his emotions, taking it out on you.

    Very brave poem, and I admire the person for having the strength which is shown here.

    5/5