That was verry
Verrry good. :) :J

I love this poem, very good descriptive words. excellent job.

At your age, you seem to create depth through your words. I simply love this piece and your penning!
Keep writing(:

Excellent! Evil or good, both in contrast. Perfect knitting of words, simplicity at best! You should have kept on writing, cos I never wanted to stop reading. :)

5/5

This poems lovely.

I love this!