In the wake...of sunlight

by Sunshine   Aug 20, 2012


For the yawning dim night that wraps itself around me;
if you believe that I'm a new moon glowing through
your hub-or if my big, still deep eyes fooled you
that I carry two spheres of a fortunate black sea

Trust me I own no mirrors to embellish your face
I've got no fortunes of silver, nor tails of fire
though have an eternal soul that'd shine forever ,
but not as infinite as your unbounded space.

Something about you terrifies the secrets I suppress
so to think my heart of glass would serve as your skin
oh how shallow you are, I can't even glow deep within
for all of my hopes are consumed by your duskiness..

Just release me, release me oh evil night
unleash the gates you've locked behind me...
so that my wishes, my prayers could break free
and get you trapped evermore in the wake of sunlight

In the wake, yes, in the wake of sunlight;
with teeth of fires eating me.

by: Rania Moallem

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Heres another

    http://vocaroo.com/i/s0AC9LMasWSZ

    great poem, loved it

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Yyyaaayy another one! thank youuuuuuuuu :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I can't stop reading this piece, over and over again I'm taken away by the sheer beauty of sorrowful and heartfelt expressions within each and every line.

    To start: The first line captivated me with the words such as "yawning dim night"---- beautiful word display!

    The entire piece is filled with an aching heart that yearns for the darkness to bring light, this is my feeling upon this piece.

    I can't help but feel a sense of desperation and within these feelings Nana has continued on with elegance...word by word.
    This poem makes me speechless... Well Done Ms SunShine

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, this poem is amazing! First, I remember you saying how you don't really like to rhyme in your poetry, and I love how you chose to rhyme here, it's not so obvious but it really fit well with the poem. I love your imagery and metaphors!!

    "For the yawning dim night that wraps itself around me;
    if you believe that I'm a new moon glowing through"

    ^ so beautifully written...

    I also love the idea of embellishing someone's face with mirrors..

    This is my favorite part of this poem:

    "Something about you terrifies the secrets I suppress
    so to think my heart of glass would serve as your skin"

    ^ the idea of your heart of glass serving someone's skin.... I can't explain how I feel when I read this! I'm just speechless!

    Congratulations on the win! You definitely deserve it <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Nema

    Incredible metaphor usage!

    Your opening lines in each stanza were strong enough to intrigue me to dig deeper for meanings.

    A fine piece of art!
    Write on~

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I seem to have a thing about sunshine of late and although sad i loved how you used this.

    You know already your one of my favourite poetesses here and i agree with everyone above your just simply epic Nana x

    Awesome Awesome Awesome write and sooooo deserves a win!!!

    Big Loves

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