Solitary

*sigh*
This is amazing write
I just don't know what to say more that awesome lol

perfectly written and I love it

(sorry comment is bad I know)
anyway keep it up =)

Your tone in here made the poem come alive for me. I enjoyed the flow of it, and I LOVE the metaphors. This is a container of heartfelt sadness. Amazing job Xanthe:)

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.

Ohh
still small bubble in my eyes, glad I anit a woman, then the makeup would run.
a small piece of you here, wonderful and new

I think one needs to read this twice because after the first reading your a little blown away that it deserves a second look so you can really appreciate the seriousness, and creativity of this poem...

I love what you have penned by saying you are completely alone that now, even agony has left you. That was just brilliant.

I tell you what the best part of this poem was,
"you acted as my
compeer when even poetry was
missing from the streets of my
thumbprint"

Amazinggggggg metaphor...just amazing. :)