Heyyy,

In the 1st stanza:
I love the metaphors in this stanza, I feel that you wanna say something in here to someone. The last line here is strong.

In the 2nd stanza
Wow the ending line here made me speechless.

All in all, this is a an AWESOME poem that cought my full attention, great job you two:)

Sorryyyy triple post:)

Sorryyyy triple post:)

I am loving some of these collabs, and this is no exception...

Separately you both write outstandingly but together OMG WTF You are exceptional.

Just love the whole concept of this, how it can be interpreted many ways and just is amazingly penned

Speechless!

Really good job both of you, it is amazing the amount of power and talent you bring with 2 small verses. x

Thisis ourstanding you guys., i love the images you penned in here although its short but the meanings are huge!

Perfectooo <3 Love it