Nice written i like it

Yes it was your fault. haha kidding. nice though.

Excellent. The emotions here are well put up and the descriptions are awesome.
The questioning at the end seemed apt.
Keep writing gal.
Awesome one(:

I can feel every word that's written as I'm reading this. It kinda rang something inside me, but it's the past, yeah who cares. Nicely written, dear. Love it! c: