A Broken Spirit

by Miyaki Zhen   Aug 22, 2012


I'm lying on my bed
With unleashed thoughts in my mind.
The PAIN.
All I can feel is the pain.
I'm HURT. Yes, I'm hurt.
Back then I said that it's okay.
But it's not.
Everything is not what it seems.
When he turned his face
to her,
I can feel it.
I'm hurt.
He ignored me.
Insulted me.
But despite of all those abasing words
from him,
I just find myself saying,
"Oh boy! how do I love thee!"
but then I know,
He loves 'her' dearly...

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  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    I love the erratic-ness to this poem.
    ^^ The flow was sketchy but fit the theme.

    I like also, how it seemed as though you were writing this as you were realising it. Realising the pain, the hurt at him loving someone else.

    In my opinion, he is not worth it - as he doesn't treat you as you deserve to be treated. No one should be insulted and abused by those they care for. It's unhealthy.

    This is a great poem. 5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Miyaki Zhen

      Hi

      thanks for the comment..
      yeah you're right.. *sigh*..
      he doesn't deserve me.. thanks for that eye-opener!!:))

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