Comments : Black heart

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Powerful, really angry piece.

    just a couple of nits

    unfathful should be unfaithful

    In the last line should stuck be stabbed?

    otherwise nice short, straight to the point piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Karla

    Nice poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is really powerful :) You done an amazing wonderful job!!!