Hmmm, its short but still thought provoking. Good write my friend :)

Your spieces says a lot though they're short, and I LOVE that.Awesome job Khalid.

A deep write in such few words. All want to claim what nature alone owns
TJ

Another great one sir.... I love the message you always give through your poems and that is what makes you an awesome writer...:)

I think you could edit richs as richs'...