Offer

by sun spots   Aug 23, 2012


I plan to make an offer,
on a house that we have seen.
I hope it is accepted,
as my girl is very keen.
We need to find our own place,
somewhere we can call home.
Living with my parents,
we are never really alone.
It would be good to turn the key,
in our own front door.
And step inside,
and do the things we couldn't do before.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Shades of Gray

    I hope you find a beautiful house for the two of you! My family just put in an offer for a house and I love it! We have been searching for many months, and just found the perfect one. We put an offer on it the night it went on the market. It's a huge investment, so make sure you love it!!
    ~Shades of Gray

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    We will find a home, its just a matter of time before something turns up we both like. X.

  • 12 years ago

    by sun spots

    Hope everything turns out ok and we manage to get a place we can call home. We have waited 28years for this day x

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