Comments : Kingdom of Purpleyellowbluegreenpinkblackgrayredorange Me

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    I LOVEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE THIS!!!

    LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Hellon

    When I read the title and this was even before I opened the poem up I though of the lyrics of A Better Man...by Pearl Jam?...She dreams in colurs, she dreams in red...etc

    Then I opened it and found all these images?

    If this wasn't about a dream you had or...even if it is...it could be the start of a story for children....have you considered taking it further

    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

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    • 12 years ago

      by Sunshine

      Hahaha don't know that song, I will look it up.
      Actually just like Larrys toothache, this start it out of nothing :P was answering random questions in the club, and while thinking of what are my dreams...I just went a little bit too honest :P

      I do wish I could get any :(
      but well....I like your idea !
      :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    This is the BEST imagery I have ever seen in a single poem!! Would love to see all that in reality :)

    It looks like one great colorful dream, it gives me hope and makes me so happy just when reading it. It speaks loads and loads of seeenity and happines; upyes I always link colors to happines. Thanks for writing such a happy, bubbly, refreshing, colorful, wonderful, creative, optimistic, lovely, incredible, amazing, epic PIECE <33

    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT TO INFINITY AND Beeeeeeeyyyyyoooooooooond :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    As I told you, this poem is very colorful, reminds me of the video clips of nancy ajram for kids... and that one for haiifa nd the baby :P looll.... it's like a candy factory

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Haha. I adore Abed. Really, yeah, this just reminded me of the songs he mentioned. Just at first. I went singing 'pos l wawa laiko l wawa' haha.
    But then again, when looking more deeply into the imagery, I felt that it's actually not only a cutie Nana piece, it's a dream by all means.

    I loved the animals bit the most, it made me chuckle. I once painted something crazy like that. Don't know if I uploaded it on FB, but you gotta see it. Oh and I painted Larry.
    : )

    Anyway, I know I talk too much and lose the point. Thamalini hal fatra, haha.
    Loved this poem, the colours, the title. Love you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You'll get your day Nana...I know it.
    You have some amazing images in this piece,
    plus you have an amazing title!!

    Wow...I love you

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow this piece has some really in depth, vivid, exciting descriptions. I really enjoyed it, and I think that there are lots of fun things mentioned. I love the fantastical little world you painted before you audience, it is wonderful and so full of life. I loved this piece.

    Fantastic write

  • 12 years ago

    by Nema

    That's a really good poem. The imagery itself is one of a kind. You have a great sense of dreaming =)

    "I dream of a big big,
    clean clear colorless rivers,"
    ^
    I think you should eliminate the "a" before big, though :)

    Lovely piece of art!
    Write on~

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    My first thought... your dreams are so colorful!!

    a yellow cow? a blue bear? and here I was wondering if the colors have any meaning or if they have any simbolism, but the more I think about it, the more I feel that the colors are simply use as happiness. As a better world where things are different and it won't matter the color that each thing has. Even if they sound strange.. I mean we are used to things being one way, but I thought that in your dreams it won't matter if things are different as long as the things that should be right stay as right.. for instance the color of the rivers should be clean clear.. in reality but also in your dreams. The color of the cow? well, it won't matter much as long is healthy. And the magic stick.. it made me wonder if that's where all of it came from.. your mind being the magic stick.

    So colorful, I also noticed the ice trees.