Wow, amazing love pieces from you as usual. The words you put into this, the imagery, just so amazing. Another great one from you.

You write love poems very well, they flow well and have a story to tell which is enjoyable to read.

This piece was no acception and a pleasure to read.

I only have one thought, and it is the title. Is there meant to be an e at the end of innocente? Or did you mean innocent? You spelled it right in your poem which makes me wonder if there is a reason is it spelled differently in the title?

Other than this, nice work and keep it up!