This poem is short and to the point with a good rhyme all the way through.
You have expressed so much depth and reflection about life that I can relate to!
I found this really captivating...

"That keep me in this living coffin"

I like the way you have linked life to a living coffin it is a very intricate metaphorical description!

I like the way you have lead the reader throughout this poem to travel back to the past with you and to discover that waiting isnt always the best solution but actually moving forward might get you there!

thankyou for sharing such a beautiful and amazing piece!

5.5 from me