by Mattias Ostling Aug 27, 2012
category :
Life, society /
other
Poetry and reading are for women, |
A true man is balanced. A balnce of humility and strength; A balnce of tears and tenacity; a A balance of Love and Leadership. Men ought not strive to be cavemen. They ought to strive for Balance in life. I think u expressed these thoughts Well. Keep it up! |
by Darren
What a great serious of questions, i think this poem proves you are more of a man than the others, yes it does have unusual form, but you cannot take anything away from the content and the message. Reading this has made me realise i am in fact a better man also. |
by Thomas
Being a man is only a social vision on manhood. You don't have to be what society wants you to be, be yourself. Cause what really matters is that you like yourself for being who or what you are. Don't be something you are not cause that leads to misery and depression. |
by Timothy
Truly, truly a lovely piece of writing, sir. I loved the amount of individualism and expression that was induced within your words. It was also quaint how much I could relate to it - I also cry every time I watch return. Congrats! |
by Jenni
I'll just copy&paste my comment here. :) |