Pallet of Beautiful

Wow, the simplicity of this piece is amazing. The rhymes don't feel forced at all. Though some of the examples of color are a tad bit bland the idea was excellent, as was the style.

I don't think Birth needs any clarification, we all understand what you mean and it would disturb the flow of the last stanza...

I love how you tried to get inside the life of the blind, difficult to imagine life without colour...

My only criticism would be that the way the colours were described is cliche, I guess that to these people, that is how they'd hear people describe the ocean etc...it just doesn't give much to the eye as a reader.

and that the capitalisation of each line is distracting...it doesn't need to be done but a minor detail

You have potential...and heart, which is always a bonus

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A marvelous piece of coulors. I truely loved how it's penned! You're always brilliant my friend and I hope you be always like that.

See a pallet of beautiful
Colours shining bright
Yellows, blues and greens
Such a lovely sight

The plurals property of colors make them attractive

A world of colour
Green as like the grass
Blue as the wide ocean
A rainbow shining through glass

'A world of colors' sounds better as plural
and 'as like' both words have the same meaning, so you better remove 'like'
provided you've to give examples for the rest of colors of rainbow thereafter finish that with 'A rainbow shining through glass'

Pink as an afternoon sky
Brown as a baby sparrow
Red like fresh spilled blood
Black as an alley so narrow

Just the red color has to be exemplified with some other attractive thing (like red rose,..etc) and not horrible (like blood) because everything here is beautiful but the blood sometimes makes the reader jump out of the poem

Yellow, the colour of a daffodil
Grey like a rainy-weathered sky
Orange like a bright taxi-cab
White, where fresh snow can be spied

Oh What a nice thought Sherden! The is a pretty good. I loved that.
The use of 'as' is better than 'like' throughout the poem

See a pallet of beautiful
Of colours that fill the mind
But all I see is the shade of black
Because since birth, I've been blind

'since birth' you have to clarify which birth 'since the birth' or 'since my birth'

Finally, another piece which is worth nominated.
Nice ending with 'blind'.