Its pieces like this one Thomas that shows me the strength of the way you write!

I started readi g and I was like, where is he going with this piece? The images were clear and vivid just like the picture you are drawing with your words. You seem to have a way of writing that somehow reminds me of someone, I really love it.

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This is brilliant bro. You have a way with your words. I was also skeptical at the beginning of the poem, wanted to really see how you would end it and i cant lie, you have me amazed.

This is very clever, i like how you have delved into the mind of these people, great ending, great rhyming and a good pace and tone.