Every line of this poem is awesome

Well done for taking the englyn milwr challenge and passing

A great effort, what do you have up your sleeve next?

As for your poem,

great imagery and I love the pace, the rhyming scheme helps greatly here, plus keeping to seven syllables helps the whole thing roll of the tongue.

good job

Loved the rhyming thing. Its always an impressive thing for me when I see poems that rhyme, well, depends on how the author did it, anyhow, like I said, I loved the way it was used in this poem of yours. Plus the way the title was used. All in all, I think this is a real good one. :)

Mmm, what do I suggest you try next hey?

I love the dark poetry, so how about a choice of either

a palindrome

or

12 lines of 12 syllables, non rhyming.

Understand the fear and despair here, and how morning light can be such blessing at nights like this.

Well worded, rhymed well

5/5 Ingrid