Comments : You...

  • 12 years ago

    by sham pulok

    Simply awesome poem..........

    In my mind, all I see is you.
    You are the inspiration to everything I do.
    You are the wind beneath my wings.
    You are simply my everything.

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wat a beautiful poem, nikita..
    Evry stanza is powered wid emotions..
    A gud rhyming poem..

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    "You are the inspiration to everything I do." caught my attention... I really felt the emotions in it...
    I think, these lines can make a good subtitle or theme of the poem... itself!
    Masterful art, well versed and rhymed.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lune de ma vie

    Another flawless poem.
    I relate again, 100%
    You really are in love and it is a great and beautiful inspiration because of the poetry you are writing cause of this person.
    Love the rhyming and the emotions swirling within the words and illuminating outward towards the reader easily being able to feel how you are feeling.
    5/5