Good job, love the shape of this......I shall just check the syllable count...............
............................Line 4 only 7, change 'you're' to 'you are' for a quick fix.................
..................line 8, 9 syllables get rid of 'the'................................................
...........................line 13 has 9 syllables.................everything else ok

now these two lines

The smile in which I'm never frown
Of all poems you're the best sets;

my humble suggestion is to change 'I'm' to 'I' and 'you're to 'you've' as in you have.

this just helps with the flow about.

apart from these minor points this poem has great imagery and flow.
I will give it a 5 now because it is almost there and I know you will fix the syllable count

best regards.

Thank you Darren, everything repaired.