Hey this is great brother
it really is, In a way you remind me of my self when i first started to write poetry, I was aiming for something exactly just like this,
this can be sung and I advice you to keep on spiting
as long as you keep it real
I <3 the content of this write as much as i love the rhyme, to talk about the ghetto and the hardship's that follow, To hold the system accountable for keeping us subservient instead of self-determined, Focusing on killing each other instead of aiming for a better life,
I have much respect to anyone who have lived under the same circumstances
Stand your ground and make a statement
You truly done the job and inspired
5/5