Aww yes! This is absolutely beautiful. I loved reading it!

Go ahead, tell me things
Things that I've already heard before
Go ahead, smile at me
So, my body can start to feel warm
Go ahead, kiss me
So I can forget all the hurt you've done
Go ahead, hold me
And I'll once again think you're the one

---I loved the way you started this poem with that first stanza. It carried such emotion and sent such a wide spread message that I kept with me through the rest of the read. Sort of like, I've heard it before, you've broken me before, but go ahead, I want you to love me!! Beautiful!

"Pull and twist my heartstrings like you do
Even after what we've been through
I know in my heart, one thing is true
My soul is always gonna yearn for you"

--The way you ended it, what a perfect ending to this amazing piece of your soul!

Thank you.

Wow!!!!! i really loved this poem and the kicker was that i was listening to "Beautiful Liar" lol

"Until a million days after the day of black sun" I really liked this line, it was one of the best I have ever heard, I adore it. Great job, I can't wait to read more of your stuff, wonderful job, I loved this poem sooo much, and there's no length limit to a poem, specially one this good

Loved it, very intriguing.