Comments : Theory of Absence

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    And here's an advice to make the theory of absence easy to go through
    in order to move on, you must understand why you felt what you did and why you no longer need to feel it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very well written poem Meme!

    Some people claim to be there when we need them but end up running away when things get tough. We don't need people like that in our lives since they only stick around for the good times.

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    I like the growing strength in this, i also love the contradictions in each stanza, the third stanza being the best. Great piece.

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    It is true; I believe we've all 'encountered' such a person in our lives before. They only linger through the 'good times' and suddenly disappear when you truly need them. The ending is soo powerful - as all your poems are - and I always find myself wanting to reach your endings because of that. You always manage to put a twist and just leave the reader speechless.
    Here, it's like you're giving that said person a 'taste of their own medicine' :)
    Love this piece. Keep writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Mareka Nolo

    Nice piece, I can relate.... thanx for writing this

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Theory of absence..... this piece is a mixture of many emotions: love, sadness, and some humor in the end... an eye for an eye, I assume... of course it will pay off!