by One Man Clan
And here's an advice to make the theory of absence easy to go through |
by Thomas
Very well written poem Meme! |
by Darren
I like the growing strength in this, i also love the contradictions in each stanza, the third stanza being the best. Great piece. |
by Xanthe
It is true; I believe we've all 'encountered' such a person in our lives before. They only linger through the 'good times' and suddenly disappear when you truly need them. The ending is soo powerful - as all your poems are - and I always find myself wanting to reach your endings because of that. You always manage to put a twist and just leave the reader speechless. |
by Mareka Nolo
Nice piece, I can relate.... thanx for writing this |
by Decayed
Theory of absence..... this piece is a mixture of many emotions: love, sadness, and some humor in the end... an eye for an eye, I assume... of course it will pay off! |