Hmmm intresting khalid

This is great Khalid, with these few words you say so much about your life. We get a real clue as to what makes you tick.

I love the honesty but I also love the self confidence to add in 'talented'

you show great self belief and are obviously a very nice guy.

The flow to this is great, It is a great example of a poem that doesn't contain any words that don't need to be there.

awesome

I love the words that all add up to the person that you are.
Impressive work!
5.5

A very simple yet impressive poem... message is conveyed aptly... it was direct and good adjectives used.... and it gives an insight about how u are, what u dream of and what u fear... very honest effort sir...

Good Work:)