How i wish this distance near...(Villanelle)

by Ş∂ņďħy∂   Jun 29, 2004


How I wish this distance near
To solve the puzzles which made us cove
And kill this silence, which I fear

Seven seas keep us apart, severe,
But couldn’t keep our hearts rove
How I wish this distance near

I hate this loneliness thickening, austere,
If only you took me in arms to relove,
And kill this silence, which I fear

Can’t stop feelings explode, which were,
Buried in heart like a treasured trove
How I wish this distance near…

Accidentally a day, if you appear
Our eyes will have a war of love
And kill this silence, which I fear

To gain your heart forever my dear
To give these love after you approve.
How I wish this distance near,
And kill this silence, which I fear.

/////A Villanelle is a nineteen-line poem consisting of a very specific rhyming scheme: aba aba aba aba aba abaa. The first and the third lines in the first stanza are repeated in alternating order throughout the poem, and appear together in the last couplet (last two lines)./////

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxKarma

    Wickett!~i love it

  • 19 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    This is a good villanelle. I'm still writing my villanelle. Have you seen a triolet, you may have already written one but I haven't finished going through them all. If you haven't have a look at mine, it's called "My Love I'll Give You Everything" - it's a nice format and rhyming scheme. Once again, great villanelle. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...

    SiE

  • 20 years ago

    by Megha

    its brilliant.....i really like the concept and obviously the formats just brilliant...i love the way uve expressed ure feelings..

  • 20 years ago

    by LiL One

    I really liked your words in this one, so much emotion like every poem u write, loved it...LiL One

  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great job Trincy! You read my mind.... I have just been thinking about doing some different forms of poetry myself...and you beat me to it!

    Awesome poem!

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