Very well done Trincy!! You have a lot of talent, I might try this one day too. Please keep writng. Thanx, Timothy r

Great job Trincy! You read my mind.... I have just been thinking about doing some different forms of poetry myself...and you beat me to it!

Awesome poem!

I really liked your words in this one, so much emotion like every poem u write, loved it...LiL One

its brilliant.....i really like the concept and obviously the formats just brilliant...i love the way uve expressed ure feelings..

This is a good villanelle. I'm still writing my villanelle. Have you seen a triolet, you may have already written one but I haven't finished going through them all. If you haven't have a look at mine, it's called "My Love I'll Give You Everything" - it's a nice format and rhyming scheme. Once again, great villanelle. I'm looking forward to reading more of your work...

SiE

Wickett!~i love it