by Darren
A good etheree however I am not sure where the acrostic part comes in unless you are refering to every line ending with an 'E' |
Thank you Darren, repaired the title. |
by Sparkling snow flake
I really like the flow of the poem except i found that the last line did go out of the flow but appart from that it was a great emotive read! |
by Amreen
Good one, good flow, great message and seems an effortless one..!! |