Comments : Live to work (Etheree)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    A good etheree however I am not sure where the acrostic part comes in unless you are refering to every line ending with an 'E'

    the syllable count is spot on, and there are some strong messages in this.
    My only nit is the final line seems to stumble a bit.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I really like the flow of the poem except i found that the last line did go out of the flow but appart from that it was a great emotive read!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Good one, good flow, great message and seems an effortless one..!!
    nice;)