Last Dance

by Maple Tree   Aug 31, 2012


My body is crumbling

such as an unstable

mountain; soon I'll

falter.

Tonight I'll dance

like a bird upon

a sequined sunset,

tasting the movement

within a heated breath,

twirling, getting drunk

on dizzy,

until the last chord

of a simple song

fades away....

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  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    Lol, I find your writing style on another level andrea, Unique to only you, I love the positiveness of this piece and the tone you left on the whole thing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Awwwwwesome!! i love dancing poems there needs to be moooooooore!!! xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Rock it girl, ROCK IT!!

    And I agree with Abed, I guess all the dancing in the club did really inpsire this :P

    But I love it, and now I wanna dance, lol :)))

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Awesome poem Andrea.. guess it's inspired by all the dancing in the club lol

    But in the end, I adored the dreamy tone... I felt like faltering between the arms of a ballerina :P

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