You Are My Love Song

Meme, the flow in this is lovely.. I most definitely enjoyed reading it, as it touched my heart with the passionate, loving tone you laced it with. keep it up!, great work :))

Passionate and overpowering love in each and every word, line and stanza.

I don't know why I didn't comment on this piece though I have read it 2 times, lol, I'm awful.

I am so waiting for Noura to compose it and Meme to sing it :P

It's really an awesome lyrical poem, sounds like a lullaby... whatever you write Meme is so soothing and melodious!

Meme,

~ Very interesting style of writting:

"I want you to think of me
every minute you're awake"

Awesome flow. It's a great love song!

6/5!

Sure thing. I have a certain melody in my head already. May take me some time to open my laptop, though.
: )