Meme- This poem brought me to tears! The in depth passion and romantic tones really sang to me. You are reaching out to your love in such a way that allows the reader to see the expressions upon your face. I could highlight many lines within this piece, but the way you speak of how you want this person to feel... just to feel you, gave me tingles and goosebumps! Truly a decorated love poem, very original and loving. I'm going to nominate this lovely poem of elegance on Monday... It deserves to be highlighted <3

Very romantic and true emotions true first love wishes described . This is sometimes the beginning of love..

Irony sometimes our wishes do not come true.
nice work. the art of love... great words. innocence.

I want you to take a
deep breath then hold
Until you exceed the
limits of your threshold
Then release and take
a new sip of the air dear
That's how I feel when I
imagine you being here
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What all your love poems have in common is the presence of this very innocent soul you possess, Whenever I have you on mind, It's your simpleness that I admire the most
You shower your love upon the person you're talking about in a way I know I haven't experinced.
you my friend have the most beautiful of souls And I never want you to change
5/5
and that verse I copied is to show how angelic is the kid in you.
I'm truly @ awe when I read poems like this
I'd nominate it if I could instantly.

Love the flow to this, the tone is very calming as well,

looking deeper (warning I might go off track)

stanza 1,

You want your partner to declare his love for you, maybe he is not as comitted as he should be, wearing it around your finger is a sign that you want to see commitment on his part.

stanza 2

You are asking that he sees only you, knows that in your heart he is the only one for you, you don't want him to look elsewhere, you want him to realise that you are his 'one'

stanza 3

this stanza to me suggests you want to start with a clean slate, forget any petty arguments you may have had and push forward as two. You miss his old love for you.

stanza 4

He may have had issues in his past, you want him to leave them behind and move forward with you. you crave his love yet he craves other things. You want to give him the best possible chance to rectify his ways.

Warned you!!

great poem meme.

Very well done :O

I want you to take a
deep breath then hold
Until you exceed the
limits of your threshold
Then release and take
a new sip of the air dear
That's how I feel when I
imagine you being here

This was my favorite stanza cause it really captures how you feel when your love is around :)

Keep writing!

Nice n beautiful writing

Meme, be honest, did you sing this poem? Because I could compose something on my piano for it!
Perhaps when I get to my FB, and if you allow it, of course.

That was so soft.

Would you please? Compose and send the melody my waaaaay :))))

Sure thing. I have a certain melody in my head already. May take me some time to open my laptop, though.
: )

Meme,

~ Very interesting style of writting:

"I want you to think of me
every minute you're awake"

Awesome flow. It's a great love song!

6/5!

I don't know why I didn't comment on this piece though I have read it 2 times, lol, I'm awful.

I am so waiting for Noura to compose it and Meme to sing it :P

It's really an awesome lyrical poem, sounds like a lullaby... whatever you write Meme is so soothing and melodious!

Passionate and overpowering love in each and every word, line and stanza.

Meme, the flow in this is lovely.. I most definitely enjoyed reading it, as it touched my heart with the passionate, loving tone you laced it with. keep it up!, great work :))