Comments : The Great Depression (pantoum)

  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Great effort Khalid, pantoums are very difficult at the best of times. The hardest thing is to choose a subject that you think will work in repitition but does not get the reader switching off.
    Very clever to pick poetry writing as the subject, discussing weekly contests etc.
    The rhymes are excellent by the way, the repitition is not forced.
    The tone is very easy going and altogether flows very nicely, I may have to try one of these.

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    I very reflective and wise poem!
    Full of meaning and devotion.
    I loved every stanza!

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Another great one sir... As darren said, pantoums are hard to attempt but u pulled it off well and u portrayed the life and phase of a poet, good and frustrating times.
    Typo: stanza 3 : Sometimes your poem rather than sometimes you poem
    Good attempt:)