Departure (Senryu)

by Meme   Sep 1, 2012


Distance grew between,
Yes! -out of sight, out of mind-
that's what I was taught.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I didn't understand the 'yes' part very much :$
    But I can say it's about keeping distance from the one(s) you love.

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      I imagined someone coming back from a distant place and then asking does distance make people apart? So I said "Yes" out of sight out of mind, but thats what I was taught. Hehe, I know I think I made it even ore confusing!

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    Bittersweet with a very clear n powerful statement
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Oh god. I must nominate this on Monday. Indeed, bittersweet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Thomas

    This sounds a little bittersweet

    Someone is leaving and you are happy about it

    Nice job ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    The depths of this senryu is awesome!!! Having distance can help, it can help a person grow but the memories take a bit longer to fade, but they do in time... very nice!!

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