Pocahontas (Haiku/Senryu)

Wow wow wow woooooooooooow, why didnt I read this before?:)

This is a master master piece, hehehe perfectly written^_^

A very cool mixture! I liked how you retold some main lines of Pocahontas. I just love the movie and the creativity behind its writer. And I'm really fond of the way you restricted yourself to haikus and senyrus because it shows your talent! :)

Intelligently crafted and brilliantly written! I love stanza three in particular because it provokes a feeling of lethargy, which in turn contrasts the calmness of the other three. Also, the subtle use of poetic devices, such as sibilance and perhaps hyperbole at times is exciting. Wonderful!

Beautiful , this really sunk in and made the images come to life this is a very creative piece indeed

I liked the too forms combined I thought it all went well together :)

Keep writing

Mixing of Different aspects of poetry can never be an easy job
I'm going to bump you sometime soon if you are ever available
Because i'm interested on learning how to do such poems,
as to how you end this poem I was left compelelty at awe.
5/5