Cane of Hurri

Love, love, love this. Will come back.

I love the title; so creative and unique, the concept of it - breaking it apart because 'hurricanes' do break things is brilliant.
I love how sea-debris-catastrophe rhymed. It flowed so smoothly and elegantly. A very enjoyable and peaceful poem to read, despite being about a hurricane, of course. Perhaps it's what the 'moonlit' added. :)
Keep writing,

Soooooo creative with the title Andrea!!

Queen of nature is who you are. Ou penned the whole atmosphere of a hurricane in those few words. It had the effect, the strength, the idea, and the depth of a hurricane.

Well done :)

Oh God.. why didn't I read this?!

Your poem is just so damp, it made me feel like I'm in some European wood.

First, I didn't understand the title, then I told myself A Hurricane? Yes I guess... because there is this stormy eye which is a beautiful description to tell how nature is angry at us. Well, the last line also sums it all up.

It's a great nature poem, Mother Nature ;)

You happen to write some of the finest Nature poems I've ever seen.
I love the idea of limbs faltering like rain between the eyes
such creativity shows exactly what kind of poets you are.
very powerful