Comments : Strolling on a September afternoon

  • 12 years ago

    by One Man Clan

    Such a fine tribute to the person you love
    5/5

    • 12 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      Thanks poems is for me powerful and endless

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is excellent. Though leafs should probably be leaves. The voice is sweet in this, it adds a dimension to this piece that I often see poets forget about. The word choice was amazing and it had a wonderful hint of helpful power to it, if that makes sense. The love is defiantly apparent and oozes from every line.

    All in all, great job

    • 12 years ago

      by Ole Carsten

      I am greatful for you kind words and have made the small change, leaves instead of leafs

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      Ole