Love lost
by AllyKat Sep 2, 2012
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Our love was on fire, a minute apart, a minute of sadness, a minute together, a minute of happiness. Our love has cooled down, all you hear is bickering and screaming. Can't stand to be around you, can't stand to be around me. Where did our love go wrong? It was supposed to be heaven but all we feel now is hate. Living with you is like hell, just end the ache, pack your things and just walk out the door. No goodbyes, no regrets, just another love long gone. I won't be back for another round, I've grown tired of these games. It's time to do I and you do you. |
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12 years ago
by AllyKat
Thank you =], I do and love is hard but if it's the right person then sometimes it's worth it.
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12 years agoby Wild flower
Im not good with love pieces, but I can tell that you hold a huge amount of love towards that person. Foos job :)
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12 years ago
by Maple Tree
Sometimes couples need a break.... a breather of sorts... You know that when couples take time to find themselves then they do become stronger and the relationship can continue... (In some cases) either way... its difficult to come to that decision.... my thoughts on this piece... now... I really love it how you are able to pour your heart out into this piece... Very proud of you noodle <3
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12 years ago
by AllyKat
Awwww I love you and I've been thinking of a break more often lately. She doesn't understand that concept though which makes it a bit hard. I was laying down trying to sleep when it kept running through my head the way it's worded and I thought "oh! Poems and quotes" lol
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