You know you have great intensity of emotions and this poem portrayed it very well.. there were few typos but I think your message, your emotions are just suffice to attract attention.. if u want.me.to specify the typos and stuff, u could pm me for it..but wonderful gal... keep writing:)

Wow, I totally relate to this poem (I think almost everybody can) and I really loved the tender way you expressed the meaning.

I've gone through some of your poems and i really loved each of the pieces...among which this one is one of the best!
I loved the emotions u've put in here. Beautifully written! U've got the talent!
1000/1000!!!