So enchanting, so enticing and so beautiful!! Here you gave a good example of romance. I loved the counting, using the number 12 for roses. |
by Amreen
This is beauty... I loved the metaphor of roses here and you have made this piece wonderful. loads of emotions. |
Inspiring. How you relate the roses to you love has a strong impact to me. Roses are so often a simbol of love, but in this poem you express how they also wither just as you love did. Gorgeous piece. 5/5 |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
Nothing lasts forever! Well written! And i really loved the ending, so powerful so true! |