Comments : Jaded Rose

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    So enchanting, so enticing and so beautiful!! Here you gave a good example of romance. I loved the counting, using the number 12 for roses.
    I love your unique print in this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    This is beauty... I loved the metaphor of roses here and you have made this piece wonderful. loads of emotions.
    a few edits to b made to make this better...
    Only first word of a sentence to be capitalized.

    Incorporated following changes if you want :

    Like you- the rose in my heart
    Years pass but the roses didn't die
    Until one day when I wake up
    Looking at the verse I realise, like our love

  • 12 years ago

    by Silent Scribbler

    Inspiring. How you relate the roses to you love has a strong impact to me. Roses are so often a simbol of love, but in this poem you express how they also wither just as you love did. Gorgeous piece. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by NobodyKnowsItButMe

    Nothing lasts forever! Well written! And i really loved the ending, so powerful so true!
    5/5