Very nice... nice description of nature's features... it is enchanting... I liked every bit of the poem... there are few typos though... but good.work:)5/5

A beautiful piece. I don't know if it was meant to be melancholy, but I felt a twinge of sadness as I read it and I thought that was lovely because so many poems are just so blunt and obvious that there's nothing to figure out in the poem, but you really allow the reader to feel whatever comes up for them.

Good job!

Very nice poem. I enjoyed reading your piece...the repetition of the lines gives it a natural rhythm! Well penned!