Your style is awesome!!

My goodness, this is a fantastic ABC poem. I.love how you managed you use such flavorful descriptions and keep a well worked flow. Magnificent job. Lovely word choice. I especially love how clear your voice was.

Crazy kill me 4 lovin t so much,bt mak sure u shoot me 11 n a half times if u av to kil me,nyc wording n yaa u av a unique way of writin

A truly beautiful piece. I must add it to my favourites. (:

Wtffff is this!!???? OMGGG

SO freaking amazing. I am literally sooooo in love with this piece...I absolutely love how this read off. As a story and not bullet points which is what a lot of people make abc poems like.

The ketchup on a bun metaphor, almost goofy, somewhat tacky, but TOTALLY amazing! What a great analogy I fell in love with those lines.

my gosh youre incredible...seriously adding this to my faves!

This made me laugh...a really belly laugh at that!!!! I always like poems when the writer directs humour at themselves....lets us know that they are human and can see their own faults and flaws and....your statement says....hey...I'm quite happy to be me....

favourite parts....

Jagged lines pour like
Ketchup onto a bun,
Layered with a sweet
Moment of emotion.
Numbing the ending
Over a sesame seed
Punctuation is how I
Qualify myself as a
Rebellious writer

^^^^

Honestly...I've learned not to use the f word in my comments so...my interpretation....rack off...I'm adding more...no that's not enough adding another squeeze for luck haha!!!

Yawning at the end of my own
Zigzag signature.

Yawning..classic...loved it!

I didn't meant I'm yawning BTW....just saying you yawning at the end of this was classic...yeah?

Is the new trend of PnQ to write an ABC poem? I could try it. I'm seeing everyone trying it. Hell, why not me.

I loved your subject and creativity, Andrea. Sorry I cannot leave but a one-liner now.

Mwa.

I realize poems like this Can never be easy to write
I love the effort you have put into this.
I also love how you correlated the dots and made a beautiful story to read, most of the poems like these end up being fragmented sentences
not the case here
5/5. never the less.