by Timothy Sep 2, 2012
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Call upon the martins and the swallows wild, |
by Amy
Oh my. Such gorgeous imagery this poem has created in my mind. The rhymes worked perfectly and they were neither forced nor distracting - something I find so hard to do. |
by One Man Clan
You are gifted when it comes To poetry that rhymes. |
by Decayed
I totally love this, too! |
by Chelsey
Wow! Timothy, what can one say about this piece of fine art? Im in love with almost an old english tone, yet no old english wording used. Not a fan of rhyming, however in this piece I feel it helped your poem and I totally enjoyed. LOVED the use of "swallow" in this ! Serious creativity. Well done my friend! |