May I cry with you?

and watch movies together, and eat ice cream, and chips and whatever we can find on the fridge?

can we just cry our souls out till our hearts can beat with peace?

Yeah, I feel like crying, too. I just love those dramatic touches you have added here and there, and I can definitely hear the echoes of the assuring statements between parentheses. Indeed, many things are felt, but can never be outspoken, even on papers. It gets scary sometimes when you have feelings inside, heaps of feelings, but you cannot share them with anybody because you're the only one who understands what's going on... Anyway, that's a remarkable piece from you. I can see you poured your heart out, and there are some images there that I was very fond of like anxiety taking place of oxygen, etc... I was also wowed by the ending as you have incorporated faith in there. I assume you said that you are not being able to pray again but cry.....

Stellar, Chels!

I have been down this road a lot of times before and I know how it feels.

"I envy those
who ink their skin and stain their diaries,
with words that define their state of mind.
(My thoughts can never be revealed)"
^^
I envy them too! Its hard to not be able to let it out, to write it away, or to let it go. So cry hon if it helps just cry, let a little bit of it out.

Excellant work you've done here Chels.
xxx

@_@!!!!!!!!!

Ummmmmmm........yeah.........i want to comment.....but i cant ....i love this write and love you too.......ill be back.....omg that was awesome x

What can I say? You truly are a writer who can pour out the feelings like no other... I just cried with you... this is a poem where many can relate too. I often find myself lurking above as Im writing about my endless sorrow... and within this poem you captured that moment... in a very creative way... love this!

Chelsey this is exceptional, so much emotion in this. I love the after thought at the end of each stanza.
The analogies such as the concrete concealing battered emotions ties in perfectly with the 'wrecking ball' part just before.
The reference to the mosh pit is great, you can almost picture it as you read it.

You have a talent for detail and portraying emotion, plus there is so much clever word use here.

The last line rounds the whole thing off superbly.

I will be back to nominate this once I get my votes.

Well then, on a bright note, You must be thankful for the way that made you feel this way, For it gave the birth for what I truly believe is an epic poem that is so much worthy of praise.

I for one can feel the amount of grief displayed
these emotions were so real that you've kept me guessing on whether you'd specify exactly what it is that would you make feel this way
and you did((I wonder if He still hears me?)

and honestly speaking
from where did you get the inspiration to write lines like these?

I gasp for breath on nights where
anxiety plays the role of oxygen,

you truly are a mastermind when it comes to poetry, 5/5 and I would nominate this in a heartbeat if I could
God bless

I was reading this yesterday trying to comment from my phone but it wouldn't let me and then I log in to find a lovely comment from you. This piece certainly breaks hearts and I'm sorry that you feel so raw. You wrote this with such strong emotion but you've always been brilliant at doing so. I wish you weren't feeling so hurt because you are such a gem. The wording and structure of this is what I like most. I wish you well :-)

Danika.

Oh wow, this is amazing. I bet it felt good to write this and get it out of your system. It's full of emotion, which I love, and you express every thought in great detail.. You made me feel almost as if I were living it, instead of reading the words you wrote. I love this poem, and just so you know, He is still listening and can hear you just fine. :) Chin up and smile, life always gets better.