Some Old Video Tapes (Sequel)

Lovely, heartfully penned verse. Only a poet can describe the sad feelings so well in a missed opportunity to recognize true love. The caring and innocence of our childhood love memories are so well unmasked in here. Simple, but powerfully penned emotions, in this sequel to your "old photo" poem. Using Sleeping beauty and Cinderella classics in the composition was crafty. Words of self regret in lost love are so touching to read. Like the "old photo's", "some old videotape's" is also an artful composition.

Well this is adorable, yet I did notice the sadness in it....funny how sometimes our childhood best friends are just friends and later in life we realize we have feelings for them, but failed to acknowledge them in the past, so its too late now.

A story I can't say I can relate to. But I know people who do.

I loved the way you penned this story. I agree with everyone else I loved the use of Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty. Even more so I loved how you stated you slept through your childhood. Brilliant.

Loved this write meme!

Woooow! I love this poem.... I love how it started with a broken VCR, it made me think of old days. They're not that old yet, but it's obviously not something people use as much now.

I must say I love fairytales... I don't believe in them, but I love them! And I love how you mentioned Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty and compared their stories to your situation. I really love your comparison of yourself to Sleeping Beauty... it was like a lesson! I loved it :)

Amazing poem! <3

It reminds me alot of your 1st poem actually
which I believe is your finest piece up to date

meme you never seize to dazzle
5/5

Very intriguing poem, creative and full of emotion.excellent
TJ