Speechless........

Very good use of your metaphors Maple.

I wish I could feather fall into the night and sleep for an eternity.

Keep writing!

I realize I have to read this poem a fourth time after I comment here. This was very mind-provoking. I don't know how you connected summer to winter in a way that made me feel cold and warm at the same time.
There are some really nice word usage here, and some metaphors were quite intriguing.
The middle part is by far my favorite. Very well done! :) I love it!

Shine on~
N.

You're a mastermind