Your man must really enjoy what you are describing here Chels ;)

We all need that someone that makes the weight of the day feel lighter.

Keep writing!

I'm not a fan of love poems here, but this is without any doubt an exquisite piece :)

"Darling, do not fret after a dreadful A.M,
the Earth naturally rotates to a silent sky
that I automatically become one with."
^How did you write these lines? I'm so envious, haha!

Love always seems infinite when you compare it to galaxies, skies, stars and the night. Both sides together make an immense power in poetry. Besides, poetry alone is infinite, let alone with the universe =)

A lovely piece of art Chels,
Shine on~

This is beautiful! I love your way with words..

"Like dusk coating the setting sun,
I will envelope your days work
and provide rest unto your weary limbs.
For I will be your midnight, catering to
the horizon you wish to abruptly descend."

What an amazing stanza to start this piece off with, already expressing your care for the person this is written for.

Overall I simply love it, this is an awesome poem. Great job. :)

I think the conceit, or extended metaphor, of this poem as a whole intrigues me. Darkness, traditionally used in a negative way in poetry and prose, is used as a calming, comforting, influence and to me the speaker aims to provide an opportunity for her lover to shine. It's submissive, but in a very tender, sweet way.
I enjoyed considering this endearing poem.