Green Prey (Triple Haiku)

by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA   Sep 4, 2012


Jungle of blue morn
Sun light caresses each leaf
Birds scatter them all

Trilling tunes sweetly
As panther sneaks stealthily
Green prey unaware

Panther leaps swiftly
Birds take to the air lightly
Alas, he vegan

By A.Sherden
04/09/12

*LTFR Club Challenge

**So I suck at syllable count - if you find any discrepancies, let me know. Thanks

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  • 12 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This is brilliant and your syllable count is spot on actually so don't worry about it.

    Great job, showing off your talent here, well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Yakori bint Muhammed

    I love any poem about nature. This is brilliant, don't know much about haiku but it portrays a beautiful creative form. You penned this amazingly. I'm inlove with this piece, its calming and refreshing to the senses. Well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by A Poets Handwriting aka ALISHA

    Thank you, Khalid.
    Means a lot. (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    This is different, sweet, great and unique poem of you. It simulates the nature. I suggest it may belong to the nature rather the funny type of poem. The syllable count is perfect although the word 'tunes' gave a 2-syllable count rather than 1-syllable but I will consider as 1-syllable. I really encourage you to go on writing such type of haikus being very attractive. 5/5

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