Your poem helped me write my newest! Cosmic makes me think of so many colors, shapes, & sizes. Which made me think of sequins. I know we had just talked about this, and how there are so many thoughts swirling around, I think this poem portrays that wonderfully. Nicely done!

What a creative write! I love how you used the rictameter, they are fun to write :) I like how you say you want to fight the nightmares too...how you just wish to dream yet there are endless thoughts running about. Good job!

HMmmmm
This isn't easy to do
and you've done a beautiful job with your descriptions
I'm glad to stumble upon your work and would love to read more by you
5/5 never the less.

Wow, I love this poem! I love this structure, it definitely looks hard! And I love how the poem isn't forced at all, it just seems perfectly written.

The title caught my eye, and I really love the content. It had a lot of meaning, and I'm sure that must've been hard with this form. I love the idea of trying to sleep, but thoughts keeping you up, and how you wish to have nice dreams, but instead there are nightmares that haunt you... I think we can all relate to this poem, I for one have had many sleepless nights.

I love it.. this is an amazing poem. I have to try this structure sometime!

Ahhhh! Nema! I love this form, haven't read it in a while! I love that you used "cosmic" to describe your thoughts, and it wasn't intended to be a nature piece, even though you incorporated nature into it.

My favorite line was "sepia- soaked nightmares"...all I could picture was me dreaming, in sepia color, and I could feel me almost running, scared.

I just loved this. Lots and lots!! :)

I love the part about sepia-Soaked nightmares... That sets a cool image. When I think about it... Everything is in sepia and the scenes of old movies jump to my mind so yeah, it's a cool way of describing nightmares.

I counted the syllables and they are right, I was just wondering if the capital letters in each line should be like that. And I am guessing, they are.

Aside from that, this was pretty cool. I prefer not to dream but I prefer dreams instead of nightmares.

I usually read Cinquain's and feel like the author had to find a way to "shove" the word to be repeated in the ending, but you worked it in effortlessly. This is a hard form to do and have the kind of flow you have here.

I really like "'tween sleeplessness and moonlit nights." <--- this line the best. It was very beautifully written.