Comments : Mist Of Lies

  • 12 years ago

    by Xanthe

    Seized -- ceased ?

    I could just hear this being sung; it's lovely! :)

    • 12 years ago

      by Meme

      Ohhh, I missed it sorry!
      All fixed now :)
      Thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    As always Meme, you fascinate me with how simple you can be, yet how creative you can go in using this simplicity as a base for magic. I liked the plot a lot!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nema

    "Your pen never ceased to keep me alive
    But also with it you penned my ending"
    ^ Those were really good :)

    I like your title a lot. The rhyme in the piece, however felt a little bit forced and trite.

    Write on~