Mistaken

I adore this write. I find it hard to write short poems and whenever I read some.. they seem unfinished, lacking. This however, is flawless.

The beauty of this poem lies in how short yet deep it is :) Great piece.

Write on~

Wow wow wow... Moonlight Muses, wtf is happening!? Sorry...but to many lovely poems this week from you.

Nominated, sure it wins!

Wow wow wow... Moonlight Muses, wtf is happening!? Sorry...but to many lovely poems this week from you.

Nominated, sure it wins!

Wow, I love the brevity here...it really surprised me and I really don't know what to say other than I think you took this one thought and really grabbed the reader here. I like the shortness, it's unexpecting yet there's still a certain pull to it. Love poems to me are such a blissful and romantic declaration of that love- and when you later remember you can't hold them it makes me think because it's already gone, or they are just too intangible. That some part of you has been untouched by that love.

Great write :)